2_05

posted December 28th, 2018, 7:30 pm


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December 31st, 2018, 6:16 pm

magi

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@Dreadogastus:

Hey, thank you for you reading. I am interested in what you think, so feel free to comment whenever you feel like. :)

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December 30th, 2018, 7:37 pm

Dreadogastus (Guest)

Up to Date 30-12-2018

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This is an interesting ride. I need to stick around.

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January 2nd, 2019, 7:33 pm

Corbin (Guest)

Making sense

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"The first chapter really didn't make much sense."

Yes, lots of interesting visual scenes but I will confess I had no clue what was going on.


"Starting on the second chapter hopefully it'll make more sense because it is telling the story in a more chronological order."

Chronological order, so far so good. Kid in trouble, threatened with annihilation by a thundering god-being, dad arrive to help. I like the use of color here, nice work. I'm not sure if the rectangle thing with a star on it is a card or a smartphone or what, but the idea that it turns blue and then transmogrifies into a god-threatening self-causality-annihilating sword is, well, pretty cool. That's quite an app.

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January 3rd, 2019, 4:25 am

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@Corbin: Hey, thanks for taking the time to comment. Its a card, by the way. I really need to make that clear.

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